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Old 01-18-2006, 04:21 PM   #1
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Old 01-19-2006, 01:47 AM   #2
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Looks pretty good. Need more color. More color will fill the blank areas, IMO.
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Old 09-06-2006, 02:15 PM   #4
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Nice layout! Good content for a perfect homebased business entrepreuners. All the best!!!
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I tried to look at it said, but it said that the server was down..
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Old 09-10-2006, 12:03 AM   #6
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Being honest here.
First impression, NLM site layed out like many many others. Hit back on the browser immediately.
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Sorry to be so blunt. Trying to think what it is. I believe it's that text in the middle. It seems to me, serious websites don't that that 3" wide text down the middle with space either side.
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Old 09-10-2006, 03:41 AM   #8
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I tried to look at it said, but it said that the server was down..

Yes. Now its ok....


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Sorry to be so blunt. Trying to think what it is. I believe it's that text in the middle. It seems to me, serious websites don't that that 3" wide text down the middle with space either side.

actually i made this site for adsense purpose and my old layout not produced me much CTR and this one makes more CTR
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The site looks pretty good...I would include 15 -20 articles in maybe an "articles" section. That said, if you've done that already...I didn't see it.
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Hi there,

To tell you the truth your website just looks like it is covered in advertisements, I can't differentiate with the adverts and the actual content. Make sure you use different fonts and styles for different things.


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To tell you the truth your website just looks like it is covered in advertisements, I can't differentiate with the adverts and the actual content. Make sure you use different fonts and styles for different things.

Hey Kieran Taylor,

As I stated above this design converts me more CTR in adsense than the old layout, around 30 times or more comparing to the old one and I tried some other layouts and tested, this layout is the winner of all my old layouts and I dont have any products or offers to market the website... so I am just concentrating on adsense on converting to more CTR... other than I agree with you, its full of advertisements and what to do... I need money, nops more money... it works and I am getting.. thats all.. thank you..
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Hi there,

Maybe, although you won't get any repeating visitors, because your website has nothing to offer people will think twice about visiting again.


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nothing wrong with the basic layout/design but i have to agree with kieron on this one - it's just a page crammed full of ads.
can't you keep the ads to the sides and put something more to read in the middle? a whole page of ads is quite overwhelming.
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What if you where just to add a small 1px border around the ads, that wouldn't be a problem, would it?

or at least around the ads right in the middle of the page
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Old 09-10-2006, 03:11 PM   #15
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On the plus side: nice colors and layout.
On the minus side: It looks like a GAP site (Google Advertising Platform) My guess the main reason the site exists is to show AdSense ads.
Too many ads too little content.
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