Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site

mlafefon · 01-18-2007, 07:13 PM

http://urceleb.onitin.com
Hi friends.
I am form Israel and this is my english site.
In this site you can download for free a program that can
creat your own magazine cove
For example:

Please forgive my bad English and if you find some spelling mistakes i'll appreciate your replly.
Please also write to me what do you think of my site.
Any other suggestion/comment really appreciated
Thanks.

toinkzzz · 01-18-2007, 07:44 PM

Hi! It looks like your center space doesnt look organized.. Id like to suggest that you redesign it..

Bring Traffic · 01-19-2007, 07:35 AM

Hi,

Mlafefon - hahahaha great Username!
I tried to look at your site but unfortunately it shows nothing.......
When will it be on? I think you have some technical difficulty's.

Let me know when its working, i'm interested to see it.

Bring Traffic · 01-19-2007, 08:00 AM

Ok, sorry, i just tried again and it worked.

This is what i think;

1. Your site looks nice and clean, the one thing that realy disturbed me was that on your home page you dont really explain to your viewers how it all works...insted i kept seeing Google Adsense....... all over!!! I think you have a great Idea there, i checked your site and i noticed that you're getting a nice amount of traffic, so i can understand why you did it like this.
You can still keep the Google Adsense and i know it's good to have it but not all over the site. But this is just what i think.

2. About your Logo, you should chang it, it look's to poor, you can do it better.

Good luck with everything!

PS - How is it in Israel?

jethrotul · 01-19-2007, 09:56 AM

I'd like to see your site, but the link isn't working... :-/

mlafefon · 01-19-2007, 02:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bring Traffic

Ok, sorry, i just tried again and it worked.

This is what i think;

1. Your site looks nice and clean, the one thing that realy disturbed me was that on your home page you dont really explain to your viewers how it all works...insted i kept seeing Google Adsense....... all over!!! I think you have a great Idea there, i checked your site and i noticed that you're getting a nice amount of traffic, so i can understand why you did it like this.
You can still keep the Google Adsense and i know it's good to have it but not all over the site. But this is just what i think.

2. About your Logo, you should chang it, it look's to poor, you can do it better.

Good luck with everything!

PS - How is it in Israel?

Hi Bring Traffic
First thank you for reviewing my site I agree with you about not explaining a bout the software much. I am going to fix it soon.
A bout the logo, well I mad it my self I am not a good designer, hope someone will help me.
b.t.w
In Israel everything is cool
Thanks

mlafefon · 01-19-2007, 02:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jethrotul

I'd like to see your site, but the link isn't working... :-/

Hi jethrotul
PLease try again now: http://urceleb.oniton.com

Haabaadir · 01-19-2007, 04:08 PM

the site finnaly work..

And it looks good.

P.S. I like that think with change the word

mlafefon · 01-19-2007, 05:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Haabaadir

the site finnaly work..

And it looks good.

P.S. I like that think with change the word

Thanks haabaadir.
change this line is a plugin that i wrote for cmsimple cms in php.

Bring Traffic · 01-19-2007, 10:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mlafefon

Hi Bring Traffic
First thank you for reviewing my site I agree with you about not explaining a bout the software much. I am going to fix it soon.
A bout the logo, well I mad it my self I am not a good designer, hope someone will help me.
b.t.w
In Israel everything is cool
Thanks

Hi,

Send me your email, i'll see what i can do for you.

Sincerely,

mlafefon · 01-20-2007, 01:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bring Traffic

Hi,

Send me your email, i'll see what i can do for you.

Sincerely,

Sent you
Thanks

jumpenjuhosaphat · 01-20-2007, 02:28 PM

I like the concept, it's a great idea. If you can promote it, you could make a pretty successful site out of that. Good luck.

LuGeLaS · 01-20-2007, 05:22 PM

good job thanks

gnatik · 01-21-2007, 04:07 PM

Interesting idea, good Adsense placement. But maybe too many google ads.

01-18-2007, 07:13 PM	#1
mlafefon Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 11	Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site http://urceleb.onitin.com Hi friends. I am form Israel and this is my english site. In this site you can download for free a program that can creat your own magazine cove For example: Please forgive my bad English and if you find some spelling mistakes i'll appreciate your replly. Please also write to me what do you think of my site. Any other suggestion/comment really appreciated Thanks. __________________ U.R.Celeb - create your own magazine cover.

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01-19-2007, 07:35 AM	#3
Bring Traffic Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 155	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site Hi, Mlafefon - hahahaha great Username! I tried to look at your site but unfortunately it shows nothing....... When will it be on? I think you have some technical difficulty's. Let me know when its working, i'm interested to see it. __________________ howtobringtraffic.com Team

01-19-2007, 08:00 AM	#4
Bring Traffic Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 155	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site Ok, sorry, i just tried again and it worked. This is what i think; 1. Your site looks nice and clean, the one thing that realy disturbed me was that on your home page you dont really explain to your viewers how it all works...insted i kept seeing Google Adsense....... all over!!! I think you have a great Idea there, i checked your site and i noticed that you're getting a nice amount of traffic, so i can understand why you did it like this. You can still keep the Google Adsense and i know it's good to have it but not all over the site. But this is just what i think. 2. About your Logo, you should chang it, it look's to poor, you can do it better. Good luck with everything! PS - How is it in Israel? __________________ howtobringtraffic.com Team

01-19-2007, 09:56 AM	#5
jethrotul Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 183	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site I'd like to see your site, but the link isn't working... :-/

01-19-2007, 04:08 PM	#8
Haabaadir Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 129	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site the site finnaly work.. And it looks good. P.S. I like that think with change the word

01-20-2007, 02:28 PM	#12
jumpenjuhosaphat Forum Admin Contributor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Denver Posts: 4,459	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site I like the concept, it's a great idea. If you can promote it, you could make a pretty successful site out of that. Good luck. __________________ Storage Sheds Lost Forum

01-20-2007, 05:22 PM	#13
LuGeLaS Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 11	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site good job thanks

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gnatik Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: UK Posts: 13	Re: Please review this "Your Own Magazine cover" site Interesting idea, good Adsense placement. But maybe too many google ads. __________________ DealsLocally.Co.Uk \| Directory of Deals & Bragains DealsLocally Articles \| SEO & other articles

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