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Old 12-29-2006, 03:22 PM   #1
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Default Help!

Like some honest criticism of how to improve my website. Overall look, layout, color scheme, content, flowability, etc.... The more comments and the more specific the comments are, the better. Thanks!


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Old 12-29-2006, 03:43 PM   #2
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So...what's your website ????
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Url is needed please
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Old 12-30-2006, 01:36 PM   #4
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Default The URL is www.center4homebiz.com

Oops! I guess it would help if I gave the URL. The URL for review is http://www.center4homebiz.com

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The site is looking good -- you can remove the spacing at the bottom of the page though. It extends the scrolling for no reason. A logo might be helpful to establish your website in visitor's head.

Below the Submit and Reset button, I see extra table lines, are they soppose to be there? I'm using FireFox 1.5 by the way.
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Old 12-30-2006, 04:05 PM   #6
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As i read the message of your site is providing opportunities for mothers to work. It is a really nice mission.

I think the layout is really clear, but there are lot of seo tasks to do. (of course only if you want to bring traffic by SEs)

On the index site i find this title tag: "Page 1". I am sure this is not the targetted keyphrase. So place the keyphrase in the title tag. It is particularly important on the index site.

If i were you, i would replace this -a href="Home_Page.html"- with -a href="/"- all around the site, because the http://www.center4homebiz.com/Home_Page.html provides the same content like http://www.center4homebiz.com/.

You don't use headings tags (h1,h2..) to structure the content, though it is really usefull to get good rankings. Eg. i would replace this code:
<strong><font size="3">Home Businesses for Moms</font></strong> to this one: <h1><a href="/">Home Businesses for Moms</a></h1>.

On the main page the description, and the keyword meta tags are a too long. Try to shorten it in order to increase their relative weight.

And 1 more thing: on the Business_Reviews.html i would write a little decription about each opportunity.

Good luck!
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As i read the message of your site is providing opportunities for mothers to work. It is a really nice mission.

I think the layout is really clear, but there are lot of seo tasks to do. (of course only if you want to bring traffic by SEs)

On the index site i find this title tag: "Page 1". I am sure this is not the targetted keyphrase. So place the keyphrase in the title tag. It is particularly important on the index site.

If i were you, i would replace this -a href="Home_Page.html"- with -a href="/"- all around the site, because the http://www.center4homebiz.com/Home_Page.html provides the same content like http://www.center4homebiz.com/.

You don't use headings tags (h1,h2..) to structure the content, though it is really usefull to get good rankings. Eg. i would replace this code:
<strong><font size="3">Home Businesses for Moms</font></strong> to this one: <h1><a href="/">Home Businesses for Moms</a></h1>.

On the main page the description, and the keyword meta tags are a too long. Try to shorten it in order to increase their relative weight.

And 1 more thing: on the Business_Reviews.html i would write a little decription about each opportunity.

Good luck!

After this kind of review there is not much to say, i agree with him.

Good luck!
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