please review the design

terrym79 · 11-21-2006, 05:18 PM

present design is better than "new". Suggest adding some complimentary colors.
the pastel green tends to be boring without it.

Site was a little sluggish, don't know if that is a 'loading' problem. You might consider validating at validator.w3.org if haven't already done so.

Good Site, just need to mix in some color.

mustafa · 11-21-2006, 07:53 PM

i have made a few changes, such as i have changed the background and also the picture which has all the content.

mustafa · 12-16-2006, 12:59 AM

hey guys, good news at last after a long time i have finally completed the new design, and have uploaded all the new pages.
i have officially launched the new and improved design.

http://www.worldofpakistan.net

mustafa · 01-29-2007, 07:15 AM

ok guys im back to my webdesigning after a months break.

i have made two new designs. the first is the greenand white combo
, and the second one is a black and white combination.
now please tell me which one is better.

Black and white combo

http://www.worldofpakistan.net/redesign/index.html

green and white combo

http://www.worldofpakistan.net/index1.html

evocombat · 01-29-2007, 08:00 AM

The last green one is the best you have done so far IMO. You shouldalign to the left I think. The title I suggest getting rid of the white drop shadow and use another font. I would improve your top title image quality. Work on a different image for the title image I think as well. The faded look is not working.
I like the lens flare affect.

For your title image maybe consider changing it to a duo tone of dark green and white.Just a thought

mustafa · 01-29-2007, 08:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by evocombat

The last green one is the best you have done so far IMO. You shouldalign to the left I think. The title I suggest getting rid of the white drop shadow and use another font. I would improve your top title image quality. Work on a different image for the title image I think as well. The faded look is not working.
I like the lens flare affect.

For your title image maybe consider changing it to a duo tone of dark green and white.Just a thought

thanx, by the last green one, do u mean the one with the wider green area ( the link i have given of in the previous post) or the present green one?

evocombat · 01-29-2007, 08:27 AM

yes, the wider green area. From your last post

Globalgoods · 01-29-2007, 01:12 PM

The colours behind the text is a little distracting on the second one, maybe try using a different font to stand out more?

mustafa · 01-29-2007, 03:52 PM

i have some changes to the black and white design. firstly, i have removed the worldofpakistan.net text, and put a banner. secondly, i have added a flare effect to the bottom right hand corner of the black background.

http://www.worldofpakistan.net/redesign/index.html

t4tom4 · 02-02-2007, 09:16 PM

Hi - It did take a while to load for me too, but otherwise it's getting there

uchoa55 · 02-07-2007, 02:51 PM

nice sites... great!

11-21-2006, 05:18 PM	#16
terrym79 Newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1	Re: please review the design present design is better than "new". Suggest adding some complimentary colors. the pastel green tends to be boring without it. Site was a little sluggish, don't know if that is a 'loading' problem. You might consider validating at validator.w3.org if haven't already done so. Good Site, just need to mix in some color.

11-21-2006, 07:53 PM	#17
mustafa Newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 43	Re: please review the design i have made a few changes, such as i have changed the background and also the picture which has all the content. __________________ World of Pakistan Its all about Pakistan.... http://www.worldofpakistan.net

12-16-2006, 12:59 AM	#18
mustafa Newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 43	Re: please review the design hey guys, good news at last after a long time i have finally completed the new design, and have uploaded all the new pages. i have officially launched the new and improved design. http://www.worldofpakistan.net __________________ World of Pakistan Its all about Pakistan.... http://www.worldofpakistan.net

01-29-2007, 07:15 AM	#19
mustafa Newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 43	Re: please review the design ok guys im back to my webdesigning after a months break. i have made two new designs. the first is the greenand white combo , and the second one is a black and white combination. now please tell me which one is better. Black and white combo http://www.worldofpakistan.net/redesign/index.html green and white combo http://www.worldofpakistan.net/index1.html __________________ World of Pakistan Its all about Pakistan.... http://www.worldofpakistan.net

01-29-2007, 08:00 AM	#20
evocombat Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Taipei Posts: 66	Re: please review the design The last green one is the best you have done so far IMO. You shouldalign to the left I think. The title I suggest getting rid of the white drop shadow and use another font. I would improve your top title image quality. Work on a different image for the title image I think as well. The faded look is not working. I like the lens flare affect. For your title image maybe consider changing it to a duo tone of dark green and white.Just a thought __________________ If visiting Taiwan please come and check out our club www.evolutioncombat.com also for the latest mma news and gossip http://www.themmaboards.com

01-29-2007, 08:27 AM	#22
evocombat Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Taipei Posts: 66	Re: please review the design yes, the wider green area. From your last post __________________ If visiting Taiwan please come and check out our club www.evolutioncombat.com also for the latest mma news and gossip http://www.themmaboards.com

01-29-2007, 01:12 PM	#23
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01-29-2007, 03:52 PM	#24
mustafa Newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 43	Re: please review the design i have some changes to the black and white design. firstly, i have removed the worldofpakistan.net text, and put a banner. secondly, i have added a flare effect to the bottom right hand corner of the black background. http://www.worldofpakistan.net/redesign/index.html __________________ World of Pakistan Its all about Pakistan.... http://www.worldofpakistan.net

02-02-2007, 09:16 PM	#25
t4tom4 Newcomer Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 34	Re: please review the design Hi - It did take a while to load for me too, but otherwise it's getting there __________________ Regards, Tom www.you-cubez.com - Looking for traffic from just £1? Advertise, Have Fun & Make Money... all with a Cube!

02-07-2007, 02:51 PM	#26
uchoa55 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 25	Re: please review the design nice sites... great!

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