Katey

Hi there,

Now z4z3 I am going to sound rather blunt here although I think that the only way to improve is from 'truthful' criticism.

Now I am an a man of experience on the web, and I have rather good instinct on whether something is a scam or real. Although if I was not too see your site on iWebTool and come across it on Google for example, I would close the browser instantly.

I think that the layout needs some 'extreme' improvement visually, maybe you should hire a web designer, or buy a pixel script. Seriously, I don't want to offend you but I would never advertise on a site that looked like that as it looks amateur and cheap.

Here is a link to a free pixel script, have a look at it and see what you think: http://www.tufat.com/s_milliondollarhomepage.htm.

I have used that pixel script before and it can look impressive if you customise it yourself. I also think that your logo is very basic as well it looks like a parody from Google's logo.

Sorry again for the hard words although you can choose to ignore or take my advice on boards, it is your decision, good luck on the site either way.


Regards,
Kieran Taylor.