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Old 10-16-2007, 11:48 AM   #1
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please review my first website

just say w/e domain name , logo , layout , service , server speed ...

BapHost.com
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Old 10-16-2007, 01:26 PM   #2
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If its your first website, Good work Chap....

Just make your top navigation in a proper way as like bottom navigation... And always try to make a Sitemap in website... That's really useful.
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Default Re: my 1st webSite!

If it is really your first site, i have to say a loud and big CONGARTULATION. Very nice work!

I think the domain name is very great, since short and easy to remember.
My main suggestion will target the site optimization and will go from the top to the bottom. The title tag shouldn't be a spot for listing your targetted keywords. Try to grab the most relevant and best custom keyphrases and place them there at every single pages. Of course, you need to know which one is the best, so you will have to do some keyword research. I suggest you to try this tool out.
So if you will have great, short talkative title for your pages you will have to write a longer text for the meta description tags. Beside good title tag this is one of the possible tools which may help to improve the click rate at the search engine result pages, so keep in mind the marketing aspects.

One more thing, in the navigation links you points to the index.html location with the text "home" instead of the "/". If i were you i would fix this asap since it may cause content duplication issues. (in the footer as well)
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Banner (image) on the top is not showing up...
Rest all looks great!!
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you buy this domain from DDboard right... i saw this domain offer there... at last the domain found the new owner
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Default Re: my 1st webSite!

There's something fishy about this site. The IWebTool forum has another "Website Reviews" thread which includes a link to an identical website with a different domain name. The thread is here . You can also find it two rows below this thread on the "Website Reviews" list.
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There's something fishy about this site. The IWebTool forum has another "Website Reviews" thread which includes a link to an identical website with a different domain name. The thread is here . You can also find it two rows below this thread on the "Website Reviews" list.

Because they both get redirected to runhosting . com My guess is they are run by that company.
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yooozy is that your design or is it a ready-to-use template? I really like the site - it looks great opened with IE, FF and Safari
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you buy this domain from DDboard right... i saw this domain offer there... at last the domain found the new owner
right but i bought it from a member ....i got banned without any reason after I requested a free domain

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yooozy is that your design or is it a ready-to-use template? I really like the site - it looks great opened with IE, FF and Safari

yeah .... it's a ready-to-use templates given for resellers
you kow you just have to edit few thing create a logo .......
that's it
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If it is your first website, you are a great designer. i suggest to remove the google adsense at the top and you need to fix the alignment of image near the search area. It is a good start. Congratulation!
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Are you using any template ... i can't believe it's your first website ... if it is, then you are a great designer!!!

Congrates!!!

Keep you keywords away from TITLE ... u r at a risk.
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c'mon guy's!

Don't waste other peoples time asking to review pre-made template given to you for free by reseller hosting company.

Put some effort in! At least replace some images or something...
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wish my first website came out like that
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Old 10-18-2007, 09:41 PM   #14
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how long did it take you to make that?
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Old 10-21-2007, 01:01 AM   #15
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Default Re: my 1st webSite!

Nice site but the domain name would probably be misconstrued in the UK.

"Baps" are something rude in the UK and other places in Europe so when people see baphosting they may think they're going to find images of something else!
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