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Old 04-27-2007, 09:09 PM   #1
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Wink ok but be gentle

here ive tried to include alittle something for everyone, it is a free site but im always changing little bits and pieces if i can do it myself or have it done when i have the cash to get my webguys onto it.

In the mean time this is what we have. This has been my little project whilst sat at home nesting. never had websites before only been using pc's a couple of years so new world to me.

http://www.developersgoldmine.com

i hope you like it. im sure we can find something to critisise heavan knows im always finding things about it for my list of changes.
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Old 04-27-2007, 09:34 PM   #2
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What script are you using for the site?

Okay, I'll try to be gentle, but I think honesty is always best....

I think that the design looks a bit retrospect. It's not horrid, but the colors are really quite a bit off. They don't seem to go together. I think it might mostly be because of the gold buttons. Although, the grey background is a bit dark. Maybe consider using a brighter color for the background color, like white. And the light blue in the margins, that should probably be white, or maybe a nice pattern, but no velvety patterns....something simple will suffice.

The way that you present the site in text is good. I would suggest that you proof read it though, just to make certain that there aren't any errors. I spotted a few.

I noticed in the lower right hand corner of the site that it says "Site by Turbo Web Design". Did they design the site?
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yes they built the site,i just bought the script, ive had alot of changes made, errors, my grammar is it eek, im hopeless like that.
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You bought the script? Do you mind if I ask how much you paid for it?
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the script as i bought it was around £175.00 - £195.00 if i remember right but i have had alot done to it since and so spent a fair bit having changes made so it was more user friendly than how it was when i got it. the design is much better now
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and thats just the main site, ive bought other scripts from them too, not built by them though but theyve modified where need be etc
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I like the idea of the site. i would watch your grammar, maybe chuck your written content into word or something, just to keep a nice and professional feel about the site!
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yes thanks rosetta. Jump picked up on that too, at the moment theres not much i can do about that as i cant change it myself, must wait for my webguys to do that on monday. my grammar is terrible but soo much better than it was two years ago. thank you for your input
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can i just ask you both what pages the mistakes are on that you have spotted? just so as i dont miss anything if you dont mind, pm me if poss thanks
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Carreral4.......Before you buy anything else from those guys, ask about it here so that you don't get screwed out of your money. I don't know what the backend of that script looks like, but I can assume it's similar to the front end. There are similar scripts available that are free...

There wasn't anything major. I'm not that great at grammer and spelling either. Here's what I came up with, only some minor changes.

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Originally Posted by Developers Goldmine
Developers Goldmine is the new world-wide one stop property website that now offers you a choice of property and development sites available on and off market! Our site is now open to agents. You will find everything you need here, with prices ranging from thousands of pounds, into the millions. Sell Petrol Stations - Care Homes - Development Sites - Hotels - Caravan Sites Leisure Centres - Houses & Flats in need of Refurbishment - Land - and much, much more...
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